Is there anyone out there...

I need some help!!  I really want to make this a great blog (it is my first, can you tell :p )  Please, please, please, if you read this blog I'd love some feedback.  I'm not really good at story writing, but some good criticism  is needed.

What would you like to see?  How do you want the story to develop? I need help with lots of things!!  Also, follow me on twitter too please, I'd love to get the word out.

Thanks for the help in advance!!